This is our recreation of the transition. Overall I am happy with this, as I think we framed the shots well, matched the shot sizes, and used the focus effectively. We also managed to create a smooth pan with a handheld camera, as a tripod wasn't available. However, if we were to do this again with more time and resources, there are a number of things I would change.
Overall I am happy with this recreation. There would be things that I would change, but due to the timeframe and filming situation I believe we did well.